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Bruce Landay's avatar

A delightful science fiction poem. This would make a wonderful short film. Very visual.

Thanks for bringing the vision to light.

Innerverse's avatar

Oooh the slow, careful way you built their world made the ending smack me like a gut punch 🥊

It’s wild how quickly I started rooting for them, how alive they felt, and how much that last can dropping got to me. Nicely done 💖🫶✨

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